Best Laid Plans: Page 1

9th Feb 2015, 10:18 AM

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Spelledeg on 9th Feb 2015, 10:18 AM

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Anddd here's page 1! We're starting off with a bang and a couple different pagey things. Mainly, I'm trying slightly smaller pages, I had originally opted for larger pages since I liked the amount of details visible. This is 100px smaller, and I changed the text at the bottom of the page. I like that it doesn't seem as pluggy, but it takes a bit of getting used to...

Anyway! We're back in a familiar courtyard. Ryae has an affinity for falling down, but that isn't the end of it this time.


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TheD-Wrek on 9th Feb 2015, 10:47 AM

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Ooh, wow. This page looks amazing! Love the movement and the flow of everything! Well done, Egg! *pinches da cheeks again* :D

Spelledeg on 9th Feb 2015, 5:22 PM

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Thank you D! :P *Pinches nose*

It's great you stopped by~ :D

TheD-Wrek on 9th Feb 2015, 6:27 PM

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I'll be here for EVERY update, Egg. :3

CiciEnixa on 9th Feb 2015, 11:09 AM

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Hoorays, page :D

The movements are so fluid, and the smashing panel looks... well, smashing XD (you can go ahead and kill me now)

Spelledeg on 9th Feb 2015, 5:26 PM

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LA PAGEEEE *page sounds in the distance*

Thank you! (hopefully the whole chapter will be a bit more motion-ee?)

Cici...here. Now it can be smashing. :'D

Alicia on 9th Feb 2015, 11:15 AM

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Oooh, that looks like it's gotta hurt. I mean, Ryae, you broke the panel even. XD

This size looks great to me by the way. ^-^

Spelledeg on 9th Feb 2015, 5:28 PM

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It probably does! It's not the last time she falls on her butt though! She broke my panel! It's really kind of rude!

Woo! :D

rufiangel on 9th Feb 2015, 1:50 PM

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EEEEEEEEEEE I'm so excited!!! :D Chapter two has starteddddd!

The movement in this page is awesome, Spellu, and I love how you opened up with that first panel - dynamic!! <333 Aww geez, I love Ryae X3

Also, couldn't really tell the page was smaller, which tells me that you really made good use of the space. :) Great job!!

Edit: Forgot to add - that panel smash is really brilliant, I love how creative you are with these things X3

Spelledeg on 9th Feb 2015, 5:31 PM

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I'M REALLY EXCITIED TOOO, Rufiiii~ :D (Now the pain and suffering can begin!)
Thank youuu~
I'm so glad you love her <3 she probably needs it haha!

I'm glad it didn't detract from the reading experience! There's a crudton of other experiments in this chapter too so we'll see!

zartala on 9th Feb 2015, 3:26 PM

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This page is so awesome!!!

All the movement and how most of the panels are physically connected to each other makes the page really dynamic. It's really cinematic! I'm especially a big fan of the shattering between panels 1 and 3.

Spelledeg on 9th Feb 2015, 5:32 PM

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Thank you so much, Zartala! :D That means a lot coming from you!

(Still can't believe Ryae went and broke my panel, rude much?)

ZeroGee on 9th Feb 2015, 6:01 PM

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somebody's gonna feel that in the morning. XD

Spelledeg on 10th Feb 2015, 12:24 PM

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Oh certainly, but I think her pride will sting for a lottt longer than her butt xD

Skweeee on 10th Feb 2015, 12:41 AM

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Whoa! Spelledeg, everything about that first panel is amazing. Pain, speed, force, impact! Rendered so beautifully. The sound effect in the background is so seamlessly integrated into the action. I am a little bit jealous.

Spelledeg on 10th Feb 2015, 12:23 PM

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Thank you, Skweeee! *-* I'm glad it was impactful!(Ha get it??)

You're doing awesome, man :)
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