Best Laid Plans: Page 4

20th Feb 2015, 2:31 PM

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Spelledeg on 20th Feb 2015, 2:31 PM

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Well that instructor spiel about shut up and listen was very helpful wasn't it?...Oh wait that only works if you listen to what's said in the spiel.


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Jarvi on 20th Feb 2015, 2:35 PM

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Someone should be paying more attention ;D

Spelledeg on 20th Feb 2015, 6:11 PM

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Oh yes ;D She certainly should!

LeRenardRoux on 20th Feb 2015, 2:35 PM

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Classic. XD

Spelledeg on 20th Feb 2015, 6:12 PM

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(It's the ponk! before the fall right?)
Thank youu for stopping by :D

LeRenardRoux on 20th Feb 2015, 9:49 PM

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baha I just realized your chapter has the same name as my current page. XD I was really confused by the notification for this reply /true story

Can I also say I love the passage of time shown by Ryae's hair? Did I already say that at some point? Saying it now. /also true story

Spelledeg on 20th Feb 2015, 10:08 PM

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Oh goodness you're right lol. I kinda noticed it earlier but xD

Nope I don't think you did! Thank you :D and I'm glad it's noticeable woooo~

HeSerpenty on 20th Feb 2015, 2:48 PM

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Ya know I was jUuuuust thinkin about BG! I'm happy it updated today :D

LOL Ryae's face in the last panel xDD--- I Love it :D

Spelledeg on 20th Feb 2015, 6:13 PM

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Aww you were thinking about BG? :D Yayyy, that makes me very glad!

Yesss the face of ponk! It was a hard call to do the grumbly faces of last page or Ryae's ponk face as my avatar xD

Skweeee on 20th Feb 2015, 3:27 PM

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Ha ha ha! When I think back at my military training, I was always the recruit getting bonked in the head, because there was a part of me that insisted on learning everything the hard way. :(

Good job at portraying the realities of training.

Q: does working with these weapons stain the hands?

Spelledeg on 20th Feb 2015, 6:18 PM

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Oh wow! Getting bonked in the head isn't fun! I can relate to the hard way part, I still seem prone to the 'let me find the hardest way ever' part.

Thank you! That means a lot, I've been concerned about these first few pages of the chapter because they build more character development than they do story and therefore have a slower pace. So I get concerned that they don't come across as interesting.(wow I rambled)

A: Something like that - the longer their abilities manifest the more the skin wears where they 'pull' from. :) Generally the black hands are only there when there's an active pull going on though.

TheD-Wrek on 20th Feb 2015, 3:50 PM

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Oh, I remember the poink! Lol XD

ZeroGee on 20th Feb 2015, 4:17 PM

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What...OWWW! :D

CiciEnixa on 20th Feb 2015, 8:11 PM

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Ooh, that is an interesting shape. I can see why Ryae got distracted there XD

I'd say Serekyei was a meanie face for doing that, except... well, he isn't. Maybe just a little. *paps Wytse because poofy hair*

Sleeper on 21st Feb 2015, 4:09 AM

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Beautiful page! are you doing something different with your shadowing?

I like it.

Spelledeg on 23rd Feb 2015, 11:41 AM

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Thank you so much, man!
I am somewhat :) I added another layer to the cel-shade! Yayyy it's noticable!

rufiangel on 21st Feb 2015, 10:09 AM

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Hum, that's an interesting shape, Byleero... Eyes on the matter, Ryae! XD;;

(Last two panels of Ryae are so cute XDD)

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 9:12 PM

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It would be good if she did pay attention! :'D But we know Ryae.

(Thank youuu! <3)

Centcomm on 24th Feb 2015, 5:58 AM

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OUCH - thats .. gonna leave a mark - Re-read the series and gotta say - nicely done :D looking forward to more :D

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 9:13 PM

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It certainly leaves a mark!

And, THANK YOUUU, that means a ton coming from you! I really admire your storytelling so it's wonderful to hear that! :D

Memoria Caelestie on 2nd Sep 2015, 3:13 PM

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Well I love that last panel, it is wonderful! I almost feel the pain of it!
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