Best Laid Plans: Page 5

26th Feb 2015, 2:46 PM

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Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 2:46 PM

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"Hey it's not Friday!" You're right! But I probably won't be around much Friday and I don't want to leave that sequence hanging. SO HERE WE ARE...with fun?

No not really, that got severe very quickly. While there aren't hidden things per se, I'm curious what all everyone will pick up on. :)

Ryae broke my panels on page 1 and again on this page. This chapter's off to a destructive start.

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On a different note, I've received some awesome and very lovely fanart from Zartala who makes Eternity Complex recently! If you like comics with mega depth and well-built lore and a super interesting world, that is the comic for you! (No really, GO READ IT)
:D I'm just about finished rounding up the art I've received from people and I want to upload it all. I've opted to just make an 'extras' comic vs. a custom page because I'm code-challenged at the moment and I feel a separate comic allows for more gushing. :)


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Sleeper on 26th Feb 2015, 2:51 PM

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Fuck!

Shit just got real!

Calm your mind and focus your core. Byleero is there, it's gonna be okay... probably.

Amazing page. Especially that second to last panel.

(I find it interesting that her breakdown started at her arm instead of the wound. I think that tells me a little something extra about the nature of their core)

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:17 PM

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It definitely got real -- really fast at that!
I'm not sure if she'll be able to calm her core though, what just happened is a bit like losing a finger or ripping a layer of live skin off. Not fun stuff.

Thank you! There was a ton of experimentation on this page and I freaked out majorly about pulling it off without it looking like poop. So I'm really glad it came out well!

(It is interesting isn't it? This page may offer some answers, as matter-pulling has been witnessed before in-comic so far. :)

Alicia on 26th Feb 2015, 2:56 PM

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Ohhhh nuuuuu! D: This kind of stuff is more dangerous than I though. ;_; I hope poor Ryae's okay, despite... you know... scars and such.

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:20 PM

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Oh yessss! (evil cackling in the background)

But, yeah it is pretty dangerous when you lose concentration on that stuff. It's tricky-tricky! We'll have to see how okay she turns out.

Odyssea on 26th Feb 2015, 3:14 PM

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Oh my. That can't be good..

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:22 PM

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Nope! There's no good things here on this page. In fact, it goes south as the chapter goes on in some ways...depends on which character you would ask. ;)

TheD-Wrek on 26th Feb 2015, 3:17 PM

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Wow, the layout of this page... just wow. And poor Ryae.. !_!

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:23 PM

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Thank you D~ :D

Yeahhh, she's gonna be feelin' that for a while. Imagine ripping some skin off your arm or chopping a finger off and-- yeah okay no don't do that.

LeRenardRoux on 26th Feb 2015, 3:17 PM

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Ouuuuch D:

I love the shattering effect on the panels!

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:25 PM

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All the ouch all the time! (Such a fun-filled page)

Thank you! I was so worried that this would end up looking cheesy, so I'm really glad it turned out okay!

Miaubol on 26th Feb 2015, 3:22 PM

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I winced. For a moment I could "feel" that pain.

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:27 PM

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Success! Err..wait, maybe that's not the best word choice here...

(Thank you, I'm glad the page was impactful!)

ProfEtheric on 26th Feb 2015, 3:55 PM

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Oh wow... that made me jump a bit, then cringe... Well done, Spell. Well done.

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:28 PM

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My evil plan is working!-- Well...that wasn't really part of the plan.

Thank you, Prof! Impact pages are something I struggle with not over or under doing so I'm glad I found the right amount of gut-punch. :)

Jarvi on 26th Feb 2015, 4:34 PM

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Ouch! Those are fragile and cause pain D:

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:32 PM

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Fragile! Yes to a degree -- depends on how much you concentrate :

But they're definitely painful when they break! Ouch, ouch ouch

CiciEnixa on 26th Feb 2015, 7:24 PM

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Oh no, the pain page has happened D:

(Looking at the ring, I just kinda sorta realized... that thing is half-Ryae's, half Ser's, isn't it? THAT'S why half of it's got blue squiggles and only half broke)

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 8:33 PM

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D: Yep the pain page happened.

(It just might be, you might be right ;D props for noticing that detail)

CrystalCircle on 26th Feb 2015, 7:30 PM

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No Ryae! That looks painful ;n;

I love the panel shatter! It really addes to the drama in this page!

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 9:08 PM

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Very painful D: !

Thank you so much! It came a long way since Lemon Berru lol!

zartala on 26th Feb 2015, 7:49 PM

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I don't think I fully appreciated just how solid and dangerous those shapes were until now. I hope Ryae's injury looks worse than it is, cause it looks really bad.

I love all of your explosive panels, they add so much energy and depth to what's going on. :)

Spelledeg on 26th Feb 2015, 9:11 PM

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Matter-pulling is funny that way - what's being thrown around can be as dense as lead or as fragile as glass, it all depends on the user and how much they're concentrating. ;)

Bad news for Ryae: It's just as bad as it looks
Good news for Ryae: ...Oh

Thank you so much for stopping by! :D I'm really glad the shatter-panels came out well, too! I often worry about paneling!

Centcomm on 27th Feb 2015, 3:23 AM

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woooch!! THATS .. gonna .. just OW .. not good DO NOT WANT! ( great page by the way ! ) maybe she can get it back under control O_O

Spelledeg on 27th Feb 2015, 11:38 AM

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There are mega DNW vibes! (And she broke my panels D:!) We'll have to wait and see how she manages, won't we?
Thank you! :)

rufiangel on 27th Feb 2015, 5:14 AM

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Ahhhhh!!! D: I saw bits before but seeing it as the whole is truly painful T__T;; ooh, Ryae, that looks baaaad...

It looks like the little blue veiny bits are sinking into her flesh? >__>

As always, love the way you do panels and layouts Spellu, you're crazy creative! <3

Spelledeg on 27th Feb 2015, 11:50 AM

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D: Painnn yeah, there's a lot of pain on this page! It's just about as bad as it looks T-T...

Not quite sinking in but you've got the right idea. ;D

THANK YOUUUU <3 :D Thank you so much for stopping by, Rufi~ <3

HeSerpenty on 27th Feb 2015, 5:03 PM

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Ooohh Ryae! You gotta keep it together, girl! Wow but it sure does look painful @___@

Wonderful page, Spell!! Can't wait for the next one!

Memoria Caelestie on 2nd Sep 2015, 3:14 PM

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Wow no, that must leave a mark. I hope she will be alright!
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