Best Laid Plans: Page 9

19th Mar 2015, 6:45 PM

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Spelledeg on 19th Mar 2015, 6:45 PM

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Ryae's plan: Get good skills. Maybe make friends...neh probably a useless extremity. 'at least I'm better than you lol'

...Well her humor was going great until that last panel there it seems. Oops.

That banter on the last page had you going didn't it? Yeahhno, these two idiots insult each other very often. I don't think even they can tell when they're serious or completely BSing it sometimes.

Also I'm trying some things (notably the technobabbley speech bubble for the task board) - do they work? :'D I was inspired by Centcomm.


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Alicia on 19th Mar 2015, 6:47 PM

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My face literally doing the D: right now! BYLEEEROOOO! ;_;

Spelledeg on 20th Mar 2015, 4:55 PM

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Oh Aliciaaaa *pappap*
It'll probably be okay! (probably)

CiciEnixa on 19th Mar 2015, 7:13 PM

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Calling Ser the THING does not excuse Ryae, though (Ser is just a doodooface that I don't like at the very most).

Deployment? Does that mean... oh. Oh no. Byleero, whatever you do just... stay here. Don't listen to Spell's script!!! D:

Spelledeg on 20th Mar 2015, 8:54 PM

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It may not be an excuse BUT she seems to think it is ;D (Ser is a doodooface, or maybe he's not. He's a doodooface to Ryae at any rate)

Shhh, don't tell him, he might end up listening to you!

niccillustrates on 19th Mar 2015, 7:16 PM

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Argh, not feeling good about that notice! *on edge of seat*

But, taking a step away from drama - I LOVE to see their height difference ;u; it's so cute? And all the glowy/sci-fi/alien visuals - GREAT!

Spelledeg on 20th Mar 2015, 8:56 PM

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But stressful notices are the best kind!-- well maybe...depending on things. Admittedly it might be bad news.(Yay seat edges!)

Eee thank you :D~! I love drawing their height differences, but it does make some scene compositions challenging since some angles that would work for other characters of similar heights don't work as well with these two knuckleheads!

Miaubol on 19th Mar 2015, 7:35 PM

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He he I fear "rapport" actually matters a whole lot for rank. ;)

Deployment.. Uuuh, that's bad news. I should have seen it coming, but still.. D:

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:25 PM

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Oh it certainly has something to do with rank. ;) If you have no friends, no one is gonna want to listen to you anyway.

It might just be good news! We just don't know.

Sleeper on 19th Mar 2015, 7:39 PM

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The task board text is a bit cramped. I spent way too long trying to read that second line before i realized it wasn't in English.

I like the silhouette action you have in that middle panel.

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 12:10 PM

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Ooo, I'll keep that in mind. It isn't important text so I thought having it small but including it for effect would be alright.

Thank you!

HeSerpenty on 19th Mar 2015, 9:05 PM

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Deployment notice? nnnNNUUUU D':
That means B is gonna be in dangerous times T__T

Spell this page is reeeally good! The colors, dialogue.. everything! I love how Ryae is excited to find out Byleero's progress too-- I dunno its really endearing for some reason.

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:26 PM

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Danger, danger everywhere~ IT'LL PROBABLY BE OKAY. :')

Thank youuuu~
I'm glad you find them endearing, tooooo <33

ZeroGee on 19th Mar 2015, 9:15 PM

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A war is coming.

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:26 PM

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A war might already be here. ;)

rufiangel on 19th Mar 2015, 9:30 PM

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Ryae is my favourite because just look at the way she bounced back after getting her arm wrecked - she's so cute. XD;

Love the effects on this page! They work really well, Spellu - those bubbles rising off the screen are great!

But yeah, last panel... :( Awww, where you going Byleero? Ryae ain't so cheerful anymore...

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:27 PM

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She's more stubborn than she is hurtable(is that a word? Should be a word)

Thank youuuuu, I was really concerned about those so I'm glad it doesn't look cheesy!

Yeah D: that might be bad news...

ProfEtheric on 20th Mar 2015, 12:43 AM

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I only have one concern re: the tech bubbles. The font is a LITTLE hard to read.

Other than that MINOR quibble, it looks great!

And, um, uh-oh...

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:36 PM

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Yeahhh, I wondered about that. D: I wasn't sure if it was any better because it isn't important info/just conveys a visual of 'hey thing is happening'? Kind of thing?

Yepp, many uh-ohs it seems!

Jarvi on 20th Mar 2015, 1:06 AM

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Uh oh.. they're sending him for battle D:

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:47 PM

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Yep D:

LeRenardRoux on 20th Mar 2015, 7:45 AM

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Byleeroooo!!!

Ryae's face in that last panel is perfection. It's so subtle.

Spelledeg on 21st Mar 2015, 6:47 PM

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Heee, thank you! Subtle to extreme expression shifts are very funn

Skweeee on 22nd Mar 2015, 10:01 AM

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I see Ryae's true self (sensitive, insecure) is peeking out here. I wonder how this news will manifest itself in her behavior?

Spelledeg on 22nd Mar 2015, 11:31 PM

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Hi Skweeee! :D
It's hard to tell what's true with her! She's a bit tricky in that department. :) We'll see what it does to her soon though!

Ninabird on 22nd Mar 2015, 1:29 PM

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Wuh oh. Somehow I think this might actually work out worse for Ryae than Byleero if he gets shipped off and she stays there.

Spelledeg on 22nd Mar 2015, 11:33 PM

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You might be right! ;) We'll have to wait and see for that part, but, we do know about Ryae's questionable reputation now. There is that much.

TheD-Wrek on 23rd Mar 2015, 6:35 PM

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Oh no... I don't like where this is headed. !_!
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