Best Laid Plans: Page 20 & 21

29th Jun 2015, 2:54 PM

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Spelledeg on 29th Jun 2015, 2:54 PM

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*Looks at date* Yeah this page is late D:. Long story short is that this took much longer than intended, hopefully the 2 page nature of it makes up for the lack of Friday update.

The last week has been very busy and I had poison oak to boot, so it was kind of hard to draw with itchy blisters on my hands. It was also bad on my face haha. I would wish having blisters on eyelids to no one.

So this is the first week I've been able to get back into the swing of things. Wooooo. Hopefully it was worth the wait!

Have a good week!


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MadJak91 on 29th Jun 2015, 3:03 PM

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That blood... does not look like normal training...

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:08 PM

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;D It's not (and I fixed the missing part of that panel..oop)

That is...something else.

James L Sarandis on 29th Jun 2015, 3:05 PM

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That panelwork is gorgeous. Fantastic work.

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:08 PM

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Thank you so much! I was experimenting a lot with the layout. :D

zartala on 29th Jun 2015, 3:07 PM

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This page is amazing!!!

Before scrolling down my first thoughts were "everyone is helping but Ryae who is pouting." Then I scrolled down to see everyone working hard.

Also what type of drill can result in the arm-melding that's happening about halfway down the page? Looks kind of scary.

One last question, for the second speech bubble, what does duraction mean? (or is my dyslexic brain playing tricks on me and I'm reading a word super wrong)

Also, I'll say it again cause it deserves repeating, this page is amazing!!! XD

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:15 PM

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Thank you! :D Hahaha, I'm glad she could surprise you a bit then!

That arm meld is what happens when two people who are manipulating matter meet the same frequency. The gist of it is that when their arms/wherever they're manipulating from is active they turn black to reflect the matter being moved.
It also means that their skin is effectively non-present to a degree and so merging of piecey parts happens. It's very recoverable though since they're separate entities, they just have to isolate their arm from the other's.

(The healing works in a similar way but something happens in healing applications which makes the matter used for it much more soluble for the receiver.)

Thank you for pointing that typo out! It is just a typo, nothing special haha! I was in a rush to finish this and forgot something else in panel 10 too. It's fixed now! :D

Jarvi on 29th Jun 2015, 3:47 PM

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Wow, what a large page! Niiice! :)

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:15 PM

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Thank you, Saari~ :D !!!

Damatris on 29th Jun 2015, 3:58 PM

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This is fantastic! <3 So pretty and interesting!

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:15 PM

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Eeee, thank you! <3

Sleeper on 29th Jun 2015, 6:32 PM

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Gorgeous page Spell! love that paneling.

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:15 PM

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Thank you, Sleeper! :D It was a pain dangit haha.

Seabiscuit on 29th Jun 2015, 7:02 PM

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Holy panels!! Beautiful stuff Spell! :D
I hope the oak heals!D:

Spelledeg on 30th Jun 2015, 1:16 PM

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Holy panels, Batman! Thank you, Sea~ <3

It's almost gone now, just a couple of live blisters left(and thankfully not on my face)

CiciEnixa on 29th Jun 2015, 7:34 PM

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I've mentioned it before, but DAAAAAANG Spell, this is such a ridiculously amazing montage and is definitely worth all the hard word you put into making it! You so BAMF XDDD

Spelledeg on 14th Jul 2015, 11:48 PM

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I know this page is past now but yayy <3 thankyou I'm so glad I managed to pull it off. There's a bunch of fun stuff going on and coming up soon! :D

rufiangel on 29th Jun 2015, 11:14 PM

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Omigosh, beautiful beautiful spread!!! ;w;* <333 Seriously Spellu, so much effort, totally paid off though! You really get a sense of how much work they've been doing and all the training as well... plus the glimpses we get of the world are lovely X3

(Ryae's half awake face is the cutest <333 and her face-planting :'D)

I like how we see a gentle development of Ryae growing to trust her team members more out of bonding (literally :'D) and experience, and I like the shot of her climbing up. X3

And the last few panels... <3333 Ryae, you are growing up X3 <333

Spelledeg on 14th Jul 2015, 11:49 PM

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Yesss the lil bits of character development ;D three months is a longgg time(well sort of) it's long enough for stuff to happen!

Centcomm on 30th Jun 2015, 1:12 AM

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Verry nice page! :D well done with the panels ! :D

Spelledeg on 14th Jul 2015, 11:49 PM

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Thank you so much, Centy!(sorry about the super late reply ><)

Miaubol on 30th Jun 2015, 5:28 AM

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A lot of shitty work to do but the plan seems to work out well. ..for now at least.

Beautiful page.

Spelledeg on 14th Jul 2015, 11:50 PM

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Mmm, well Ryae has a certain thing about plans she's involved in. We've seen a little bit of that already. ;D

Thank yoU!

ProfEtheric on 30th Jun 2015, 11:49 AM

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Oh heck yeah, Spell!

This page is so, so, SO worth the wait!

Excellently done!

Spelledeg on 15th Jul 2015, 12:01 AM

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Thank you Prof! I'm glad how it turned out ^^

niccillustrates on 30th Jun 2015, 10:53 PM

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Aaah! I just caught up with this and WOW these pages are awesome! Nice flow of action/montage :)
*On edge of seat* Aaargh how will this go?!

Spelledeg on 15th Jul 2015, 12:02 AM

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Thank youuu, that means so much coming from you since your sequences are gorgeous~ :D

(It probably won't go well, not many things do for Ryae)

HeSerpenty on 4th Jul 2015, 3:19 AM

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I can't believe how much work you put into this sequence here, girl!! AMAAZIng and beautiful and such a smart way to progress the story!! I feel like I can see maybe a smidge of character growth throughout this! :D

Spelledeg on 15th Jul 2015, 12:02 AM

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Awww thank you >u< I'm really glad it's visible!

Spelledeg on 15th Jul 2015, 12:02 AM

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Awww thank you >u< I'm really glad it's visible!

TheD-Wrek on 9th Jul 2015, 5:12 PM

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I've been meaning to comment on how amazing this page is!

P.S. - Fen keeps on moving on up the chart of fave BG characters on cuteness alone. X)

Spelledeg on 15th Jul 2015, 12:03 AM

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Aww thanks D! :D

xD Everyone seems to love Fen, let's hope nothing bad happens...

Ninabird on 9th Jul 2015, 9:15 PM

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Amazing montage! She looks... really happy and really tired in the last panel.

Spelledeg on 15th Jul 2015, 12:05 AM

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I'm so late in replying to everything booooo.

Thank you!

I've no doubts she's way tired at the end of this - a cycle is comparable to a month, so this is about three months of harsh training.

Memoria Caelestie on 2nd Sep 2015, 3:26 PM

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I am going to agree completely with that person on that!. It really looks good!

kara on 12th Dec 2015, 5:08 AM

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Ooh this page is beautiful, Spell! <3
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